Giorgio Gilestro
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PNAS hard limits now met: title 120/135 chars; Significance rewritten to 117/120 words (plain register, carries the CL frame); Abstract rewritten to 241/250. Style pass over the whole manuscript per GG: em-dashes cut 94 -> 20 in the body (appositives to commas/parentheses, trailing clauses to colons/semicolons), tic phrases removed (quietly/sprawling/ no-longer-metaphorical/pays-for-itself/deserves-its/whatever-one-thinks/ celebrated/we-think and kin), rhetorical framings flattened to plain statements. Main text 4,809 words + 456 table words + 65 refs; estimated ~10 PNAS pages with the six composed figures (within the 12-page hard max; above the 6-page preference — trim options noted in work order). Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01BkRLcc18rwT2Lysu6PbG7v |
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