style: remove herald sentences (announcer claudisms)

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Nine sentences of the 'The diagnosis comes first.' genus removed or
folded — announcements that add nothing over the sentence that follows:
'This population also reproduces.', 'One consequence of drift deserves
its genetic name.', 'It is also only the entry point.' (folded), 'The
question this paper addresses is...', 'I begin with a result...', 'The
engineering point survives the definition:' (rewritten plain), 'The
supported conclusion, stated conditionally:', 'The strongest constraint
comes from...' (inverted to content-first), 'The framework's reading of
that trajectory is concrete.'. Functional enumerator colons and content-
bearing topic sentences kept. 19 pp rebuild clean.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01BkRLcc18rwT2Lysu6PbG7v

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